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Duration
6 weeks (Weeks 25–30)
Core Standards
RI.7.1 · RI.7.8 · RI.7.9 · W.7.1 · W.7.7 · W.7.8 · W.7.9 · SL.7.4 · SL.7.5 · L.7.3
Suggested Texts
Oregon Wild, NWF articles; Braiding Sweetgrass excerpts; species fact sheets; opinion & counterargument pieces
Signature Project
Advocacy Poster (original art) + 3–5 min. spoken presentation
Grammar Focus
Formal vs. informal register · domain-specific vocabulary · hedging language · transitions in argument · sentence-level precision
Oregon Connection
Choose a real Oregon issue: Pacific salmon, wolves, old-growth logging, spotted owls, high desert, osprey, or another cause you care about
25

Choose Your Cause

Browse current issues · Choice reflection · Formal vs. informal register · Begin research folder
DayActivity
MondayReading + Exploration Browse 3–4 current articles from Oregon Wild, the National Wildlife Federation, and the Oregon Department of Fish & Wildlife (ODFW). Choose topics that are genuinely active issues: Pacific salmon and dam removal, wolves returning to eastern Oregon, old-growth logging and spotted owls, high desert ecosystems, or another issue that interests you. Read each article for 10–15 minutes and take quick notes: What's the issue? Who's affected? What's at stake for wildlife?
TuesdayWriting — Choice Reflection Write a choice reflection (1–2 paragraphs): Which of the issues you read about pulled at you the most, and why? What do you already know or believe about it? What questions do you have? This is informal writing — your real voice, your real reaction. No need for formal essay structure today. End with a working title for your cause: "I am going to advocate for ___________."
WednesdayGrammar — Register Introduction to formal vs. informal register. Compare two short passages on the same wildlife topic: one from a casual blog post, one from a government report or scientific summary. List 5–6 differences in word choice, sentence structure, and tone. Then practice: rewrite two informal sentences in formal register and two formal sentences in informal register. Discuss: When would each be appropriate in advocacy writing?
ThursdayResearch Setup Set up your research folder (physical or digital). Create sections: Sources, Notes & Quotes, Counterarguments, Vocabulary, Poster Sketches. Return to your chosen issue and find one strong source — a current article, a fact sheet, or an ODFW species summary. Read it carefully, take notes in your own words, and copy down 2–3 direct quotes you might use later. Label everything with the source title, author (if listed), organization, and date.
FridayDiscussion + Domain Vocabulary Introduce domain-specific vocabulary for your chosen issue. Look up and define 5–6 key terms you encountered this week (for example: "threatened species," "ESA listing," "riparian habitat," "old-growth forest," "apex predator," "keystone species"). Write each term in your own words and note where you first encountered it. Then discuss: What makes a wildlife issue feel urgent? What would have to change for someone who doesn't care to start caring?
  • 1Of the Oregon wildlife issues you browsed, which one affected you most emotionally? What specifically about it got your attention?
  • 2Why do you think some environmental issues get a lot of public attention while others are nearly invisible? What makes a cause feel newsworthy?
  • 3What's the difference between caring about an animal because it's beautiful or fascinating, and advocating for it because it's ecologically important? Does it matter which reason you have?
  • 4When you read a formal report versus a personal blog post about the same wildlife issue, how does your reaction change? Which one persuades you more, and why?
  • 5Robin Wall Kimmerer writes in Braiding Sweetgrass that plants and animals have their own gifts and purposes — they are not just resources for humans. How does that idea change the way you think about an endangered species or a threatened habitat?
  • 6What do you think is the single biggest threat to Oregon's wildlife right now? What makes you say that?
  • 7If you were designing an advocacy campaign to reach people your age about a wildlife issue, what would you focus on? What would make them actually want to read it or watch it?
Choice Reflection (Informal — Personal Voice)

Write 1–2 paragraphs explaining the Oregon wildlife issue you've chosen to advocate for. This is informal — write in your own real voice, not a school essay voice. Tell why this issue matters to you personally: Is it a specific animal? A place you've been or want to go? Something that feels deeply unfair? What do you already know, and what do you most want to find out? End with a one-sentence statement of your cause: "I am going to advocate for ___________."

Register Practice (Grammar — L.7.3)

Find one passage (3–5 sentences) from a casual online source about your chosen issue, and one passage from a formal source (government report, scientific article, or NGO fact sheet) on the same topic. Write them side by side in your journal. Then: (1) list three specific differences in word choice or sentence structure, (2) rewrite one informal sentence in formal register, and (3) write a sentence explaining which register you plan to use in your advocacy essay and why.

Domain Vocabulary Entry

Choose 5 domain-specific terms you will need for your issue (examples: "ESA listing," "riparian zone," "trophic cascade," "old-growth stand," "anadromous fish"). For each term: write the word, its definition in your own words, the source where you found it, and one sentence using it correctly in context. Keep this list — you'll need it when you write your essay in Weeks 28–29.

26

Evaluating Sources

RI.7.8 source analysis · Claim/evidence/credibility · Sketch poster concept
DayActivity
MondayReading + Analysis Find and read your first strong source on your chosen topic — a current article from Oregon Wild, NWF, or ODFW, or a news article from a reputable outlet. As you read, annotate it: mark the central claim, circle key evidence, and note anything that seems like an opinion presented as fact. After reading, complete Source Evaluation Notes (see prompt below) for this source.
TuesdayRI.7.8 — Evaluating Claims Review the RI.7.8 standard: evaluating whether the reasoning is sound and the evidence is sufficient. Return to your first source. Identify: (1) the central claim, (2) at least two pieces of evidence used to support it, (3) any loaded or emotionally charged language, and (4) any gaps — things the author doesn't address. Write your evaluation in your research folder.
WednesdayReading + Analysis — Source 2 Find and read a second source on your topic. This one should be different in type from the first: if Source 1 was a news article, try a species fact sheet, a primary source (scientific summary or agency report), or a longer opinion piece. Complete Source Evaluation Notes for Source 2. Then compare the two sources: Do they agree? Do they emphasize different aspects of the issue? Which feels more credible and why?
ThursdayGrammar — Hedging Language Introduction to hedging language: words and phrases that show uncertainty or degree without overstating ("research suggests," "evidence indicates," "it is likely that," "one possibility is," "scientists believe"). Find 3–4 hedging phrases in one of your sources. Then practice: take 3 strong absolute statements about your issue and rewrite them using appropriate hedging language. Discuss: Why would a scientist or advocate use hedging? Does it make an argument weaker or stronger?
FridayArt — Poster Concept Sketch Begin your advocacy poster with a concept sketch. Your poster will eventually be large-format painted or mixed-media, featuring original artwork (animal illustrations, habitat imagery) plus your key argument and a call to action. Today: make 2–3 rough thumbnail sketches — different layouts, different focal images. Which animal or scene best represents your cause? What colors feel right? Jot notes on what text elements you'll need (slogan, key fact, call to action).
  • 1What is the difference between a fact and a claim? Find one example of each in one of your sources and read it aloud. How can you tell which is which?
  • 2What makes a source credible? List the criteria you used to evaluate your two sources this week. Which criteria matter most to you?
  • 3Did either of your sources use emotional language to make a point — words designed to make you feel a certain way? Is that manipulative, or is it a valid persuasion technique?
  • 4What did your two sources agree on? Where did they differ? What might explain the difference?
  • 5Why might a scientist or wildlife advocate use hedging language ("research suggests…") instead of just stating "this is true"? What does that tell us about how knowledge works?
  • 6Think about your poster concept sketch. What image or symbol would best represent your cause to someone who knows nothing about it — something that would make them stop and look?
  • 7What's one thing you learned from your sources this week that genuinely surprised you or changed what you thought you knew?
  • 8If you found a source that seemed reliable but said something you strongly disagreed with, how would you handle that in your research? Would you ignore it, include it, or address it?
Source Evaluation Notes — RI.7.8

Complete a Source Evaluation Notes entry for each of your two sources. For each source, write: (1) Full citation: title, author/organization, publication date, URL or location. (2) Central claim: What is the main argument or point in one sentence? (3) Key evidence: List 2–3 specific pieces of evidence the author uses. (4) Credibility assessment: Who published this? What are their credentials or potential biases? Is the evidence current? (5) Your evaluation: Is the reasoning sound? Is the evidence sufficient? Note any gaps, unsupported claims, or loaded language. This is your working research document — keep it in your research folder.

Source Comparison Paragraph (RI.7.8)

Write a paragraph (6–8 sentences) comparing your two sources. Identify: one thing they agree on, one significant difference in emphasis or evidence, and which source you find more credible and why. Use specific details from each source to support your comparison. This paragraph is practice for synthesis writing — you'll need this skill in Week 27.

27

Multiple Perspectives

RI.7.9 synthesis · Opposing viewpoints · Hedging language · Begin painting poster
DayActivity
MondayReading — Opposing Perspective Find and read a source that presents a perspective opposing or complicating your position — an opinion piece, an industry statement, a letter to the editor, or an article covering the economic or social costs of wildlife protection. You don't have to agree with it, but you need to understand it. Take careful notes: What is their main claim? What evidence do they offer? What values seem to drive their argument?
TuesdayReading — Different Angle Source Find a fourth source that approaches your topic from a different angle: a first-person account from a rancher, tribal member, fisherman, or local resident affected by this issue; a piece from an Indigenous land stewardship perspective (Braiding Sweetgrass excerpts may be useful here); or a historical article about how this issue developed over time. Complete Source Evaluation Notes for this source and add it to your research folder.
WednesdayWriting — RI.7.9 Synthesis Paragraph Write a synthesis paragraph pulling together at least three of your four sources. Your synthesis paragraph is not a summary of each source — it is a paragraph organized around an idea, with evidence woven in from multiple sources. Choose one key idea your sources collectively illuminate (for example: "The recovery of Pacific salmon depends on both removing barriers and restoring habitat, but stakeholders disagree about who bears the cost"). Draft the paragraph today.
ThursdayGrammar — Transitions in Argument Study transitional phrases used in argument writing: concession transitions ("although," "while it is true that," "admittedly"), contrast transitions ("however," "on the other hand," "yet"), and reinforcement transitions ("furthermore," "in addition," "this is supported by"). Find 2–3 of each type in your sources. Then revise your synthesis paragraph to include at least three different transitional phrases that improve the flow and logic.
FridayArt — Begin Poster Painting Begin painting or constructing your advocacy poster. Use your best concept sketch as your guide. Start with the background and large shapes — don't try to finish the details today. Focus on your main animal or habitat image. Use whatever media you have: acrylic, tempera, mixed-media collage. The goal today is to get paint or material on the page and establish the overall composition and color palette.
  • 1What was the strongest argument you found on the opposing side? What made it hard to dismiss?
  • 2Is it possible for two people to look at the same set of facts about a wildlife issue and come to completely different conclusions? What would cause that to happen?
  • 3Robin Wall Kimmerer describes a relationship between Indigenous peoples and the land that is fundamentally different from how most modern policy treats nature. How does that perspective change the way you think about who gets to decide what happens to a species or habitat?
  • 4How do you acknowledge an opposing argument in your own advocacy without undermining your position? What does it look like to be fair to the other side while still arguing for your cause?
  • 5What's the difference between summarizing what multiple sources say and synthesizing them into a new idea? Try to explain it in your own words.
  • 6Think about the different stakeholders in your chosen issue — wildlife agencies, landowners, tribes, timber companies, conservation groups, scientists. Whose voice do you think is most often left out of the public debate? Why?
  • 7How has reading the opposing perspective changed (or not changed) your position? Did it strengthen your argument, or did it make you genuinely reconsider anything?
Synthesis Paragraph (RI.7.9)

Write a synthesis paragraph (8–12 sentences) that integrates evidence from at least three of your four sources. Do not structure the paragraph as "Source 1 says… Source 2 says…" — instead, organize it around one central idea or tension, and bring sources in as supporting evidence. Include: a topic sentence stating the central idea, evidence from at least three different sources (with parenthetical attribution), at least two transitional phrases, and a closing sentence that points toward your own position. This paragraph may become part of your essay in Week 28.

Counterargument Reflection

Write a short reflection (4–6 sentences) on the opposing or complicating perspective you found this week. Answer: What is the strongest point on the other side? How would you acknowledge it fairly in your essay without abandoning your own argument? What is your response to it? Use at least one hedging phrase ("it is true that," "while some argue," "although this concern is valid…") to introduce the counterargument fairly.

28

Build the Argument

Reread strongest sources · Draft advocacy essay · Transitions in argument · Continue poster
DayActivity
MondayReread + Plan Reread the two strongest sources from your research folder. This time, read with your essay in mind: highlight or flag every passage that could support one of your main argument points. Then write an essay outline: (1) your central claim in one sentence, (2) two body paragraph topics, each with 2–3 pieces of supporting evidence from your sources, (3) the counterargument you'll address, (4) your call to action for the conclusion. Take your time with the outline — a clear plan makes drafting much faster.
TuesdayWriting — Introduction Draft Draft your introduction paragraph. A strong advocacy introduction does three things: hooks the reader (a startling fact, a vivid image, a compelling question), provides brief context (what is this issue and why does it matter now), and ends with a clear thesis — your central claim about what should happen and why. Write at least two versions of your opening sentence and choose the stronger one. Aim for 6–8 sentences total.
WednesdayWriting — Body Paragraph 1 Draft your first body paragraph. Follow the structure: topic sentence (one clear point supporting your thesis), evidence from sources (2–3 pieces, with attribution), your analysis (explain WHY this evidence matters — don't just list it), and a closing sentence that connects back to the thesis. Use at least one transitional phrase and at least one domain-specific vocabulary term. Aim for 8–10 sentences.
ThursdayWriting — Body Paragraph 2 Draft your second body paragraph, following the same structure. This paragraph may address a different angle of your argument, or it may be where you acknowledge the counterargument and respond to it. If you address a counterargument here, use hedging language to present it fairly, then clearly pivot back to your own position with a strong transitional phrase ("Nevertheless," "However, the evidence shows," "Despite this concern…").
FridayArt + Written Explanation Continue working on your advocacy poster — add detail to your animal or habitat illustration, refine colors, and begin thinking about where your text elements will go (slogan, key fact, call to action). Also draft a 2–3 sentence written explanation of your poster: What does the image represent? What argument does it make visually? This explanation will accompany your poster in the final presentation.
  • 1What is your central claim — your thesis — in one sentence? Read it aloud. Does it make a clear, specific, arguable point, or is it still too vague?
  • 2What is the difference between evidence and analysis? Take one piece of evidence from your draft and explain, in your own words, what it proves and why it matters. That explanation is analysis.
  • 3How do you decide which evidence to include and which to leave out? What makes a piece of evidence "strong enough" for an advocacy essay?
  • 4What is the call to action in your essay? What do you want readers to actually do, think, or change after reading your argument?
  • 5When you reread your sources with your essay in mind, did you notice anything you had missed the first time? What stands out more now that you have a clearer argument?
  • 6How is writing an advocacy essay different from writing a persuasive essay? Is there a difference, or are they the same thing?
  • 7Think about your poster as an argument. What is it arguing, and how does the visual image make that argument? Can a painting make a claim the same way a sentence can?
Advocacy Essay Draft — Introduction + 2 Body Paragraphs (W.7.1, W.7.8, W.7.9)

Write a draft of your advocacy essay introduction and two body paragraphs. The introduction (6–8 sentences) should include a hook, context, and a clear thesis. Each body paragraph (8–10 sentences) should follow the structure: topic sentence, evidence with attribution (cite your sources by author/organization), analysis, and a closing sentence. Requirements across the draft: use at least four domain-specific vocabulary terms, at least three transitional phrases, at least one hedging phrase, and formal register throughout. This is a draft — it doesn't need to be perfect, but it needs to be complete.

Sentence-Level Precision Practice (L.7.3)

Find three sentences in your draft that feel weak, vague, or too long. Write each original sentence, then rewrite it for precision: cut unnecessary words, replace vague terms with specific ones, and tighten the sentence structure. For each revision, write a one-sentence note explaining what you changed and why it's stronger. This is practice for the revision work you'll do in Week 29.

29

Revise & Strengthen

Peer review · Sharpen claim · Formal register editing · Finalize poster · Rehearse presentation
DayActivity
MondayPeer Review Exchange your draft with a parent, co-op classmate, or writing partner for peer review. The reviewer should read the draft and respond to three questions in writing: (1) What is the writer's central claim? Can you state it in your own words? (2) Which piece of evidence is most convincing? Which feels weakest? (3) Where does the writing feel informal or imprecise — and what is one sentence that could be made stronger? Read the feedback carefully and highlight the suggestions you plan to act on.
TuesdayRevision — Sharpen Claim & Evidence Revise your draft based on peer feedback. Focus first on the claim: Is your thesis specific and arguable? Rewrite it if it's too broad. Then audit your evidence: Does every piece of evidence directly support your claim? Cut any evidence that drifts off topic, no matter how interesting it is. Add a detail, statistic, or quote if any body paragraph feels thin. Aim for a stronger, tighter draft by end of the day.
WednesdayRevision — Formal Register + Draft Conclusion Read your entire draft aloud. Mark every sentence that sounds informal, casual, or conversational. Revise those sentences into formal register: replace contractions, elevate word choice, and restructure run-on thoughts. Then draft your conclusion paragraph: restate your thesis (not word-for-word — rephrase it), summarize your strongest points briefly, and end with a powerful call to action. What do you want readers to feel, think, or do?
ThursdayArt — Finalize Poster Dedicated art day: finish your advocacy poster. Add your text elements — your slogan, key fact or statistic, and call to action. Make sure these are readable and positioned clearly within the composition. Step back and look at the whole poster: Does the image carry your argument? Does it make someone want to stop and look? Make any final additions or touch-ups. Sign your work.
FridayPresentation Prep — Stop Motion OR Slideshow Prepare your 3–5 minute presentation and create a visual companion for it. Option A — Stop Motion: Make a 20–30 second stop motion clip showing a key fact or moment from your cause (e.g., habitat loss, a species' journey, a data comparison). Film with your phone or tablet using small figures, paper cutouts, or clay. Option B — Photo Slideshow: Assemble 5–7 images (found photos, your own art, or drawn panels) with short captions into a simple slideshow to display during your presentation. Either way, also write your presentation outline on note cards — not a script, just key points and transitions.
  • 1What did peer feedback reveal about your essay that you hadn't noticed yourself? Was there any feedback that was hard to hear — and was it right?
  • 2After revising, is your thesis stronger now? Read your original and your revised thesis aloud side by side. What specifically changed?
  • 3What does it feel like to cut evidence you worked hard to find? How do you decide what's worth cutting for the sake of a tighter argument?
  • 4Why does formal register matter in advocacy writing? Who is the intended audience for your essay, and how does register affect whether they take you seriously?
  • 5What is the difference between a conclusion that summarizes and a conclusion that compels action? What does yours do?
  • 6When you look at your finished or nearly-finished poster, does the image strengthen your written argument? Does it add something the words can't say on their own?
  • 7What is the most important thing you want your audience to remember after your presentation? If they could only take away one idea, what would it be?
Peer Review Response (W.7.5)

After receiving peer feedback on your draft, write a 1-paragraph revision plan. Answer: What are the three most important changes you will make to your essay, and why? For each change, explain what the original problem was, what you plan to do differently, and how you expect it to improve the argument. This is a thinking-on-paper exercise — not formal writing, just clear planning.

Conclusion Draft (W.7.1)

Write your conclusion paragraph (6–8 sentences). Do not begin with "In conclusion." Restate your thesis in fresh language, briefly reinforce your two strongest points without repeating them word for word, and end with a call to action — something specific, actionable, and appropriate to your audience. Your final sentence should be the most powerful sentence in the essay. Read it aloud: does it land?

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🎉 Unit 5 Showcase — Advocacy Presentation

Final proofread · Oral introduction · Poster display · Advocacy presentation + stop motion or slideshow
DayActivity
MondaySelf-Reflection + Final Proofread Write a self-reflection on your research process (see prompt below). Then do a careful final proofread of your complete essay: read it slowly, aloud, one sentence at a time. Check for: subject-verb agreement, consistent formal register throughout, correct punctuation for citations and transitions, and any sentences that still feel unclear or imprecise. Make all final corrections and produce your clean final copy.
TuesdayWrite Oral Introduction Write your 1-paragraph oral introduction for the presentation. This paragraph (spoken aloud, about 60–90 seconds) should: introduce your issue in a way that hooks the listener, briefly explain why you chose this cause, state your central claim, and preview your poster. Memorize or deeply familiarize yourself with this paragraph — you will say it without reading it word-for-word. Practice it three times today.
WednesdayFull Presentation Rehearsal Run through your complete presentation from beginning to end, including your oral introduction and poster walk-through: 3–5 minutes total. Record yourself if possible, or present to a parent or sibling and ask for one specific piece of feedback: Does my argument come through clearly? Practice at least twice. Adjust your pacing — it's common to rush when nervous. Aim for a confident, conversational delivery, not a word-for-word recitation.
ThursdayPresentation Day Prep Set up your presentation space: display the poster where it can be seen clearly, have your essay or notes nearby for reference, and prepare any materials you want to share (a fact sheet, a handout, printed photos of the animal or habitat). Do one last calm rehearsal. Take a few minutes to think about why this cause matters — the more genuinely you care, the more compelling your presentation will be.
Friday🎉 Showcase — Advocacy Presentation Set up your showcase space: display your poster prominently, have your essay and note cards ready, and queue up your stop motion clip or photo slideshow. Invite your audience — family, neighbors, anyone willing to listen. Run the presentation: (1) Open with your 60–90 second oral introduction. (2) Screen your stop motion or slideshow. (3) Walk through your poster and present your full argument (3–5 minutes). (4) Read your strongest essay paragraph. (5) End with your call to action. Open a brief Q&A. Celebrate — six weeks of research, real thinking, real advocacy. You spoke up for something that can't speak for itself.
  • 1Looking back at all six weeks: how has your understanding of this issue changed from Week 25, when you first chose your cause, to now?
  • 2Which part of the research process was hardest for you — finding sources, evaluating them, synthesizing them, or writing the argument? What did that difficulty teach you?
  • 3After researching and writing about this issue for six weeks, do you feel more hopeful or less hopeful about the future of Oregon's wildlife? What makes you feel that way?
  • 4What does it mean to have a "voice" in a public issue? What are the different ways a person — especially a young person — can actually make an impact on an environmental problem?
  • 5How did combining art and writing in one project change your experience compared to a written-only assignment? What did the poster let you express that the essay couldn't?
  • 6If someone in your audience came up to you afterward and said they wanted to do something about this issue, what would you tell them to do first? What's the most realistic, concrete action an ordinary person can take?
  • 7What is the one thing — one fact, image, idea, or moment from your research — that you think you'll remember for the rest of your life?
  • 8You researched a real Oregon wildlife issue and made a real argument about it. Do you think your work could actually change someone's mind or move someone to act? Why or why not?
Self-Reflection on Research Process (W.7.7)

Write a self-reflection (1–1.5 pages) on your research process across this unit. Answer these questions honestly: (1) How did you find your sources, and what made some more useful than others? (2) What was the hardest part of evaluating sources — when did you feel genuinely unsure whether a source was trustworthy? (3) How did reading the opposing perspective affect your thinking? Did it strengthen your position, complicate it, or genuinely change any part of your argument? (4) What would you do differently if you were starting this research over? (5) What does it feel like to argue publicly for something you actually believe in?

Oral Introduction Paragraph (SL.7.4)

Write out your spoken oral introduction — the paragraph you will say at the beginning of your advocacy presentation. It should run approximately 60–90 seconds when read aloud. Include: a hook (a startling fact, a vivid image, or a question that draws your listener in), a brief explanation of what the issue is and why it matters right now in Oregon, a statement of your central claim, and a preview of your poster. Write it to be heard, not read: use strong verbs, concrete images, and short punchy sentences where they help. Practice it until you no longer need to read it.

Unit Closing Reflection

Write a short closing reflection (1 paragraph) to mark the end of this unit. Answer: What did you learn about yourself as a researcher and writer? What do you want people to know about Oregon's wild places that most of them probably don't? What will you carry forward from this work — a fact, a feeling, a habit of mind?

Assessment Rubrics

Source Evaluation Notes (Weeks 26–27)
Standards: RI.7.1 · RI.7.8 — Evaluates claims, evidence, and credibility of informational sources
CriteriaExcellent (4)Proficient (3)Developing (2)Beginning (1)
Identifying the Central ClaimCentral claim is accurately and precisely identified in one strong sentence; distinguishes claim from supporting detailCentral claim is identified clearly; may be slightly broadClaim identified but confused with a supporting detail or too vagueClaim missing, incorrect, or simply restates the source title
Evidence EvaluationLists 2–3 specific pieces of evidence; distinguishes between facts, statistics, expert opinion, and anecdote; notes any unsupported claimsLists 2–3 pieces of evidence with brief description; some differentiation of evidence typesEvidence listed but not described or differentiated; may simply quote without analysisEvidence section missing or lists only one vague example
Credibility AssessmentEvaluates author/organization credentials, publication date, potential bias, and whether evidence is current; makes a reasoned credibility judgmentAddresses author/organization and currency; notes at least one potential bias or limitationMentions source name but credibility evaluation is superficial ("it seems reliable")No credibility assessment; accepts or rejects source without reasoning
Sound Reasoning Evaluation (RI.7.8)Identifies specific loaded language, logical gaps, or unsupported leaps in reasoning; explains why they weaken or complicate the argumentNotes one area where reasoning or evidence is not fully sufficient; provides brief explanationAcknowledges that reasoning could be stronger but offers no specific exampleDoes not evaluate the quality of reasoning; only summarizes the source
Written Precision (L.7.3)Notes are clear, specific, and use domain-appropriate vocabulary; sentences are precise and completeNotes are clear and mostly specific; minor vagueness in one or two placesNotes are incomplete or use vague language that reduces usefulnessNotes are too brief, illegible, or incoherent to be used in research
Advocacy Essay or Letter (Weeks 28–30)
Standards: W.7.1 · W.7.7 · W.7.9 — Argues a position with evidence from research; acknowledges counterclaims; demonstrates formal register
CriteriaExcellent (4)Proficient (3)Developing (2)Beginning (1)
Central Claim (Thesis)Thesis is specific, arguable, and clearly stated; takes a clear position on the issue and previews the argument; placed effectively in introductionThesis is clear and arguable; present in the introduction; may be slightly broadThesis present but vague ("this is an important issue") or difficult to locateThesis absent, merely states a topic, or is a statement of fact rather than an argument
Evidence Quality (W.7.9)Draws on multiple strong sources; evidence is specific, cited with attribution, and directly supports the claim; distinguishes between stronger and weaker evidenceUses evidence from at least two sources with attribution; evidence supports the argument; most evidence is specificEvidence present but thin, general, or not clearly connected to the claim; sources may not be citedLittle or no evidence from research; relies on opinion without support
Counterargument AcknowledgmentFairly and accurately represents the opposing view; uses hedging language to introduce it; responds with a clear, logical rebuttal that strengthens the overall argumentCounterargument acknowledged; response is present and logical; hedging language mostly used correctlyCounterargument mentioned briefly but not accurately represented or not responded toNo counterargument acknowledgment; argument treats issue as entirely one-sided
Conclusion & Call to ActionConclusion restates thesis in fresh language, reinforces key points, and ends with a specific, compelling call to action appropriate to the audienceConclusion restates thesis and includes a call to action; may be slightly genericConclusion present but merely summarizes without forward momentum or call to actionConclusion missing or simply repeats the introduction; no call to action
Formal Register (L.7.3)Formal register maintained consistently throughout; domain-specific vocabulary used accurately; no contractions or informal phrasing; transitions used effectivelyFormal register mostly maintained; one or two informal slips; domain vocabulary present and mostly accurateRegister inconsistent; noticeable shifts between formal and casual language; limited domain vocabularyEssay written largely in informal or conversational register; few or no domain-specific terms
Conventions (W.7.4)Virtually no errors in grammar, punctuation, or usage; sentences vary in structure; essay reads as polished and completeMinor errors that do not interfere with meaning; sentences mostly variedSome recurring errors (comma splices, subject-verb agreement, run-ons) that occasionally distractFrequent errors that interfere with the reader's ability to follow the argument
Oral Advocacy Presentation + Poster (Week 30)
Standards: SL.7.4 · SL.7.5 — Presents claims and findings clearly; uses multimedia (poster) to support the argument
CriteriaExcellent (4)Proficient (3)Developing (2)Beginning (1)
Claim & Organization (SL.7.4)Central claim is clearly stated early; presentation follows a logical structure (intro, argument, call to action); transitions between points are smooth and explicitClaim is present; presentation is organized; a few transitions could be smootherClaim is present but presentation jumps between points without clear structureClaim is unclear or absent; presentation feels disorganized or incomplete
Evidence & ReasoningPresents specific, cited evidence from research; explains WHY each piece of evidence supports the claim; demonstrates command of the materialPresents evidence from research with attribution; reasoning is mostly clearEvidence mentioned but not clearly connected to the argument; may rely heavily on notesLittle evidence presented; claims asserted without support; material appears unfamiliar
Delivery (SL.7.4)Speaks clearly, at appropriate pace, with purposeful eye contact; voice conveys genuine engagement with the topic; uses pauses effectivelyMostly clear delivery; some eye contact; pace appropriate; engagement evidentSome portions are rushed or mumbled; limited eye contact; reads from notes extensivelyVery difficult to hear or follow; reads entire presentation from paper; no eye contact
Poster as Argument (SL.7.5)Poster is clearly referenced and integrated into the spoken argument; the image and text elements reinforce the claim in a way that adds meaning beyond words alonePoster is displayed and referenced; speaker explains its connection to the argumentPoster displayed but barely referenced; connection between visual and argument is not explainedPoster not referenced during presentation; functions only as decoration
Poster — Craft & Visual ArgumentOriginal artwork is detailed, intentional, and clearly represents the animal, habitat, or issue; text elements (slogan, key fact, call to action) are readable and well-placed; overall composition makes a strong visual argumentOriginal artwork is present and relevant; text elements included; composition is clearArtwork is present but minimally developed; text elements present but hard to read or poorly placedArtwork is minimal or does not represent the issue; text elements missing or illegible
Call to ActionPresentation ends with a specific, compelling, and realistic call to action; speaker communicates genuine urgency and investment in the causeCall to action present; specific enough to be actionable; speaker conveys investment in the topicCall to action is vague ("people should care more") or delivered without convictionNo call to action; presentation ends without a clear ask of the audience